Lost!

Last week, students wrote a narrative around the topic, "Lost." I was blown away by all the creative ideas- from lost teeth, to lost puppies and even a lost city! This weeks featured narrative is by Oliver, who has worked hard to incorporate onomatopoeia, descriptive vocabulary and dialogue into his story.

The Rare Ruby

By Oliver- Year 2

BOOM! The city bank had been robbed. They had stolen the rare ruby! When the heroes came, they punched the robbers and accidentally knocked the ruby.

The ruby landed at the undead graveyard. It was night, so the zombies came and took the ruby. They were as powerful as a herd of bad bulls.

When the heroes arrived at the graveyard, the next day, they started the battle instantly. The Boss Zombie was easy to defeat because it was day, not night.

But they needed to find the ruby. They looked in their underground basement. Just after, they blinked. They said, "Is that really the rare ruby?" 

When they got home, they put the ruby in its rightful place but the only thing they worried about was...would the zombies come back for more?