Thursday, 10 March 2016

Wow Writer of the Week

Last week's writing topic "The Hero" was thoroughly enjoyed by the students of Room 23. It was great to read such entertaining narratives about the adventures of some familiar and original superheroes!

The Wow Writer of the Week was Francis, whose story was nominated for his excellent use of dialogue, sophisticated vocabulary and onomatopoeia. Well done, Francis!

The Hero

As the sun rose up, gleaming in the sky, there was a legendary superhero that slept in his lair. Ring! Ring! Ring! 

"Hello?" inquired the superhero.
"Help! Help!" yelled a lady. "There's a robber in the city and he's stealing everything!" The superhero gasped.
"Don't worry, I'm on my way."

As the superhero was flying in the air, there were lots of ninjas blocking the way. And with a POW! and a BAM! He defeated them. As the villain robbed everyone's furniture, he didn't realise there was a superhero behind him...The superhero gave him a PUNCH! A BAM! He also gave him a dynamite in the back.

The villain retreated and never came back. The whole town was thrilled that the villain surrendered and it was all thanks to the superhero!

Would he save the day again next time?

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