Nifty Narratives

In Big Write today, we looked at different ways we can "hook" our reader. We talked about how we can use descriptive language to set the scene of our stories, without specifically revealing the setting, keeping our readers on the edge of their seats! I'm so impressed with the wonderful writers in Room 23! This is just a preview...more to be revealed at the Learning Journey afternoon on Tuesday!

Ava- It was sunset and the creatures were all in bed. It was nice and cool, No waves were going. It was a quiet night at the beach. Everyone was in bed and having dreams and the only sound you could hear was an owl going, "Hoot!" What a lovely night it was.

Zanetta- As the sun set, I saw the beautiful sky turn yellow, orange and red. It was a beautiful sight to see.

Annalisa- As the rough water started to calm and continued to go in and out, in and out, the beautiful colours lit the wonderful sky. Where could I be?

Shayla- What was that? I see blue. Is it an underwater volcano or beautiful crystals?